McGuffin Feedback Summery #1

For the group feedback session I didn't receive much feedback as my project was already fairly developed. I was however able to give the others in my group advice as they were a little further back than I was. This was especial the case as every one in my group was doing game design so I was able to give a lot of mechanical advice for how their McGuffins would interact with base gameplay. I was also able to give narrative advice but I found that the advice that I gave on this was a little more basic and open for interpretation as others world building was under-developed.